She was already broken, not saying go the vanilla route, but his selfishness might have led to her death. Those who find no value in life NEED to be given some or else they might choose to end it. Still good plot, fine story, predictable end. 7/10
I personally can't deal with idiots like this guy. He is extremely vanilla which wasn't really what I was looking for. I am more for people who understand the dynamic of such situations. Of Course him wanting a 13 yr old to accept his confession of love was more off putting than an opportunist who just takes one's virginity and uses it to ruin their life.
>>70868 @ Anonymous77046
She likely wasn't the 1st. And Clearly wasn't the last. The "thing he had good" was young onaholes that were easily persuaded. Objectively speaking. I do not condone what he did, I simply don't condemn it either.
I read the tags, so I already knew what I was getting into. Art is phenominal, but the story wasn't for me personally. Wasn't bad by any stretch just not my cup (mind break,drugs, toys)I actually enjoyed just about everything else well done
>>152204 @ GundamKira
Then read the tags next time. I can't stand whiny fools that complainabout what they read as if the tahs don't give away the scenario. Just avoid the tags "loli", "snuff" and "guro". Don't be pissy because you can't handle it. The art was immaculate and the plot while scarce paints a picture. If the Artist managed to illicit and emotion of you, they have done a good job, simple as that.
For anyone confused. She is a masochist but also for (whatever reason) dislikes pleasure and kindness. She also dislikes being compared to her mother and wants to be abused by the alcoholic father
>>1072433 @ Anonymous
I Dislike fake people sure and I by no means am "Not a fucked up individual". That being said Domination is HOT, The fear shown is HOT, and the fact that it was pen an paper and didn't harm anyone physically, due to just being a DARK FANTASY is HOT. That being said I don't jerk off and people going to a Doujin website to complain when they should have red the tags is still a pet peeve.
>>1257205 @ Pornupine
Forget the NTR tag, its the Guro one you missed. The story is cruel because in the free opinion fantasy of some a happy ending ruins the escapism and excitement. For some seeing a vanilla end with one of the parnters death or getting assaulted would do the same. In a power fantasy the Happiness of the MC takes priority over the npc, Hentai is usually the same. Unless you are a Cuck of somesort.
>>1255089 @ Marik
I have read good stories here that have good dialogue with stunning art, I am just wondering to myself why this wasn't the case. Thank you for the offer however.
I know there isn't a "plot" tag but when the art is 15 out of 10 and you get a bunch of dialogue that sounds like it came straight out of "step-bro I'm stuck" *Porn-hub intro plays* I just have to ask why? T.T
>>1254960 @ Pornupine
Did you come to a porn to complain XD? Your response is no different than all the people that watch people play GTA and say they they are a threat because they casual kill people in-game. It wasn't the creators fault for making you read, nor was it his fault you didn't pay attention to the tags. As the joker says: You get what you fucking deserve.
Damn... Just why? Why did you butcher the plot as well as the character's personality? Maybe there was a prequel to explain why they are like that, however ,until I find an answer this is just awful. -So says the Sovereign
She likely wasn't the 1st. And Clearly wasn't the last. The "thing he had good" was young onaholes that were easily persuaded. Objectively speaking. I do not condone what he did, I simply don't condemn it either.
Then read the tags next time. I can't stand whiny fools that complainabout what they read as if the tahs don't give away the scenario. Just avoid the tags "loli", "snuff" and "guro". Don't be pissy because you can't handle it. The art was immaculate and the plot while scarce paints a picture. If the Artist managed to illicit and emotion of you, they have done a good job, simple as that.
I Dislike fake people sure and I by no means am "Not a fucked up individual". That being said Domination is HOT, The fear shown is HOT, and the fact that it was pen an paper and didn't harm anyone physically, due to just being a DARK FANTASY is HOT. That being said I don't jerk off and people going to a Doujin website to complain when they should have red the tags is still a pet peeve.
Forget the NTR tag, its the Guro one you missed. The story is cruel because in the free opinion fantasy of some a happy ending ruins the escapism and excitement. For some seeing a vanilla end with one of the parnters death or getting assaulted would do the same. In a power fantasy the Happiness of the MC takes priority over the npc, Hentai is usually the same. Unless you are a Cuck of somesort.
I have read good stories here that have good dialogue with stunning art, I am just wondering to myself why this wasn't the case. Thank you for the offer however.
Did you come to a porn to complain XD? Your response is no different than all the people that watch people play GTA and say they they are a threat because they casual kill people in-game. It wasn't the creators fault for making you read, nor was it his fault you didn't pay attention to the tags. As the joker says: You get what you fucking deserve.
Plot wasn't a tag. A reason isn't needed. Sex is sex, amd if theres a rape tag well... You know what you were getting into
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