>>1259434 @ Anonymous9942
That begs the question. Why lie? Monogomy is the standard I am sure, but poly "relationships" also exist. As far as manipulation goes if he told her upfront that there were others instead of that he loves only her it would have been more effective in my opinion. The point of breaking someone should be not just to take advantage, but to build an unwavering loyalty. Ignore her for a bit until she comes to you, then come clean, make her either choose to let you go, or to accept there are others. Just my opinion on the matter
>>1092744 @ Anonymous203006
On the fence implies hesitation. Those against NTR aren't "on the fence" they vehemently reject it with no doubts or 2nd thoughts.
Hm, it isn't vanilla. But closer to happy sex? Not for me but by no means is it bad. Possibly missing a tag, jist can't tell which.
Visceral, to the point, no sugar coating. Well done
Generally speaking if it isn't "sole male/ sole female" it is either group (like this title) or Orgy which implies multiple partners in a large group
It would seem piercings aren't my thing. Good to know
The killing of both was a bit much. The 1st bratty one fine. The 2nd one it felt like you could have just broken her by slapping her a few times
Even though I know how it ends. I commend her spirit. He really should have died though
She was already broken, not saying go the vanilla route, but his selfishness might have led to her death. Those who find no value in life NEED to be given some or else they might choose to end it. Still good plot, fine story, predictable end. 7/10
Way too rushed otherwise solid enough story
I personally can't deal with idiots like this guy. He is extremely vanilla which wasn't really what I was looking for. I am more for people who understand the dynamic of such situations. Of Course him wanting a 13 yr old to accept his confession of love was more off putting than an opportunist who just takes one's virginity and uses it to ruin their life.
>>70868 @ Anonymous77046
She likely wasn't the 1st. And Clearly wasn't the last. The "thing he had good" was young onaholes that were easily persuaded. Objectively speaking. I do not condone what he did, I simply don't condemn it either.
Prostitution is simply not for me. Art is nice though
I read the tags, so I already knew what I was getting into. Art is phenominal, but the story wasn't for me personally. Wasn't bad by any stretch just not my cup (mind break,drugs, toys)I actually enjoyed just about everything else well done
Read the tags before you read the story complaining about the elments in the story explicity put in the tags is a waste of a comment
>>152204 @ GundamKira
Then read the tags next time. I can't stand whiny fools that complainabout what they read as if the tahs don't give away the scenario. Just avoid the tags "loli", "snuff" and "guro". Don't be pissy because you can't handle it. The art was immaculate and the plot while scarce paints a picture. If the Artist managed to illicit and emotion of you, they have done a good job, simple as that.
For anyone confused. She is a masochist but also for (whatever reason) dislikes pleasure and kindness. She also dislikes being compared to her mother and wants to be abused by the alcoholic father
>>1072433 @ Anonymous
I Dislike fake people sure and I by no means am "Not a fucked up individual". That being said Domination is HOT, The fear shown is HOT, and the fact that it was pen an paper and didn't harm anyone physically, due to just being a DARK FANTASY is HOT. That being said I don't jerk off and people going to a Doujin website to complain when they should have red the tags is still a pet peeve.
>>1257205 @ Pornupine
Forget the NTR tag, its the Guro one you missed. The story is cruel because in the free opinion fantasy of some a happy ending ruins the escapism and excitement. For some seeing a vanilla end with one of the parnters death or getting assaulted would do the same. In a power fantasy the Happiness of the MC takes priority over the npc, Hentai is usually the same. Unless you are a Cuck of somesort.
I just didn't read because mind control isn't a tag i am interested in, what is the plot of this for anyone who finished?
>>1255089 @ Marik
I have read good stories here that have good dialogue with stunning art, I am just wondering to myself why this wasn't the case. Thank you for the offer however.

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