I liked this one. In combination with the first part this actually presents some semblance of proper plot with minor comedy relief at the beginning. Still not as good as two little gems I found here years ago, but much better than most anyway. 5/5.
>>1077417 @ Chaosmastermind Well... the time stop being used by the female for once is a neat twist on the usual plotline, no matter how useless in comparison to the character's beauty/sexiness.
Well... the time stop being used by the female for once is a neat twist on the usual plotline, no matter how useless in comparison to the character's beauty/sexiness.