as far as I could see Grammar fuckups didn't reach the point where it deserves warning, especially not when it is already tagged with CGrascal, he's infamous for having 10 years of experience and still putting out work where the English fluency is below average but not bad enough to tag. Grammar nazi's with zero tolerance would block his scanlator tag entirely instead of relying on lowering the bar for the Poor Grammar tag.
This was great! Loved how it started with the dude simply enjoying her stuffy(smelly?)panties/pussy before it escalated from there. Purple Haze always gets it right especially with the ladies of Bleach...
I know this is just supposed to be fiction but what the hell, is that kid swallow a full bottle of Viagra or something cause I feel so hard to believe anybody can cum that much without stopping to rest at all.. he still a brat though.
Hm, hopefully.
Although I would have prefered if the dad banged Nao when she was wearing her skirt rather than her pajamas.
4.0 for this one, its good...but then the author cuts it short.
You could say it a happy ending huh.. huh ??
Well all of pages is making me hard while reading it
plus she's so hot comparable to the real woman