this would have been better as a multipart story, instead of a one-shot. I feel like you could probably have gotten 3 or 4 chapters out of this, and easily made more. it kinda gives me "H-ero Classroom" vibes.
Disgusting. The part of the boy not wanting to share his girl with the others but she still offered her ass, not sure if she was joking or not, and they still double teamed her was the final straw. Gets the lowest rating possible.