"But then, five years later, when the mall is finished, he visits.
He wants to see that, even though all of his work to make her happy destroyed the future he'd hoped for, there is still something good to come from this. Still a place where those who would have been lost, rejected, harmed by the very nature of the world... where they could experience life as he wished she would be able to.
He watched for hours, tears coming and going, thin wraps held tightly in his hands, before finally forcing a smile to his face and turning around.
...only to find himself looking at a familiar face, untouched by bandages, with the softest smile in the world. Her hand is laid upon a bar, one he can remember designing specifically to ensure that she'd be able to walk alongside him freely.
And for the first time in five years, his smile is honest and pure.
For he has found her, and he has so many stories to tell."
Ah, Ignore it. I accidentally "edited" it by mistake. There are no changes
He wants to see that, even though all of his work to make her happy destroyed the future he'd hoped for, there is still something good to come from this. Still a place where those who would have been lost, rejected, harmed by the very nature of the world... where they could experience life as he wished she would be able to.
He watched for hours, tears coming and going, thin wraps held tightly in his hands, before finally forcing a smile to his face and turning around.
...only to find himself looking at a familiar face, untouched by bandages, with the softest smile in the world. Her hand is laid upon a bar, one he can remember designing specifically to ensure that she'd be able to walk alongside him freely.
And for the first time in five years, his smile is honest and pure.
For he has found her, and he has so many stories to tell."
You meant grave, right? -.-
what did you edit here?