Still waiting for the story to make some sense, maybe in the final chapter. There's nothing wrong with the style of illustration it just doesn't fit a story that tells you so little with words. The artwork needs more details so it can give you hints as to what is going on.
Bad ending? I don't think so. It will be hard for her to find another one with the size of the chubby guy's cock, so she will remain unconfirmed with the others and will end up being a slave to him.
He fucked up his chances
5/5