Been months since I read something funny like this and it have a good plot too, the only issue I have with this is that near the end The Manager don’t have any dialogue whatsoever other than moaning, this make the doujinshi feels soulless, like the MC is having sex with a sex doll rather than a person.
Pretty good concept but I think the translation could’ve been done much better and there seem to be problem with page 4, like it get accidentally cropped.
Stfu
I tried to respect all the contribution rules, where can I see the reason for rejecting the work? I appreciated your time.